As Talyeer jogged through the hallway of the compound, Amber stood at a long range covering him. He rolled into a crevice and motioned for her to come forward. They spotted a lone doorway at the end of the hall.
"That's it all right, that's the prison area." whispered Amber, "They usually have one or two guards watching over the prisoners. Let's go!"
Talyeer and Amber rushed up to either side of the doorway and held their breath. He threw a small pebble from the ground inside the prison.
"Hey Pell, you hear that?" said the first guard.
"Hear what?" said the other guard.
"That noise! Go check it out. It might be the monster."
"Fine..." Grumbled Pell.
Pell walked out the doorway and looked down the corridors.
"Nothing here bro!" he shouted as he turned around.
Lightning fast, Talyeer took a throwing knife and whipped it at Pell's head. It hit with a solid whu-thump and Pell fell to the floor dead. Amber turned around and with a sharp crack! finished off the other brother. Talyeer walked into the prison. It was a tiny corridor with chambers in the walls. A large space for the guards with a small door panel leading to somewhere else. Talyeer walked down the walkway and saw ten people total, with seventeen skeletons. Talyeer blasted the lock on each of the small prisons and the occupants thanked him. When all of the prisoners were assembled at the front room, Talyeer said," OK people, getting in here as one person was one thing, but now, I have to get twelve people out. So I'm going to need help. We only have nine weapons for you all. One person will have to be a scout with only a vibroblade. A small Bothan walked to the front of the tiny crowd. "I was a scout for the Mandalorian Navy. I'll take the dagger." He said. "Perfect! Now we need people to cover our backs and be a vanguard. Murmurs went throughout the crowd. "Oh and if you're worried about the Ackley, I killed it." Cheers went up throughout the crowd and everyone was exuberant! "Shut up! You'll give our position away! Now move!" Whispered Talyeer. The makeshift platoon snuck along to the armoury where they could all reclaim what was rightfully theirs. They reached the armory are with little trouble besides a few sprained ankles from the first drop. Unfortunately, the guards had already arrived...
Tuesday, May 5, 2009
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You are a wonderful writer, C. Your narrative flow is exceptional--exciting. The Mandalorian Chronicles are easy to follow, yet intellectually stimulating. You can expect a wide-ranging demographic (audience) following. I enjoyed meeting you and wish you the best. I'll keep reading and sharing your site with other young writers for enjoyment and inspiration (not plagiarism). Regards, K.
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